I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello, Cole I think that you had a GREAT Holiday And I think you did a Great job at talking about it I really like how you said "And then..." It felt like you were making it seem Cool Anyway I do have feedback I do like the "And then..." - Orlando
Hello, Cole I think that you had a GREAT Holiday And I think you did a Great job at talking about it I really like how you said "And then..." It felt like you were making it seem Cool Anyway I do have feedback I do like the "And then..." - Orlando
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